design interface

design interface for interactive story.  give your comments ;]   

click on it to view it for a clearer view. ;]
the main page
the main page with rollover effects
the 2nd page

the 3rd page

character page  - the young girl

01. are the fonts readable? 

     [yes / no]

02. is the background suitable for the theme?

    [yes/ no]

03. which part of the interface design is the most interesting?

 A. The typography

 B. The illustration style

 C. The mood & theme

 D. Nothing at all. (doesn't impress me)

 E. Fine with everything

04. do you find this style (vector) interesting ?

 A. yes, it works for me

 B. it's quite okay

 C. nah, its rather plain. (why)

05. can you understand the story from the text?

 A. yeah, its clear

 B. hmm, not really. (why)

06. are the visuals (illustrations ) strong enough?

 A. yeah, I can understand it, without reading the text

 B. it takes a while to fully understand it.

 C. no i don't understand it at all. ( why)

07. what other suggestions or comments to improve on the interface?

 (ie; more elements can be added, improve on colour & theme ......)

thank you for your patience and time ;]